[教育]雅思寫作課件－xyh-lesson1_簡介

1、聯系方式,微信：113532910郵箱：113532910@qq.com電話：15001829196,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,1,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,2,教學內容,雅思寫作的題型類別大作文命題規(guī)律答題紙的使用中國考生寫作分數偏低的六大原因雅思寫作的評分標準雅思寫作四大步驟真題解析,題型類別,Task

2、 1 （20分鐘，字數不少于150字，占總分40％） － 學術類：圖表作文（餅、線、柱、表格、地圖、流程） － 移民類：書信（投訴、建議、感謝、請求、道歉、其它）Task 2 （40分鐘，字數不少于250字，占總分60％） － 議論文或報告類文章 － 學術類與移民類考查內容相同,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,3,Task 2 按照提問方式分類,To w

3、hat extent do you agree or disagree?Discuss both views and give your own opinionsDo you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?Do you think it is a positive or negative development?Problems + Reasons + Recom

4、mendation (報告類）,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,4,Task 2 按照考試話題分類,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,5,社會生活類教育類政府投資類科技類抽象類,答題紙的使用,字數符合要求書寫清晰規(guī)范 － Block style (齊頭式）：每段開頭頂格寫，段落之間空一行 － indented

5、style（縮入式）：每段開頭后退3～4個字母距離， 段落之間不空行＊建議使用齊頭式，看起來更加清晰易讀，且空行顯得字數多。,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,6,中國考生寫作分數偏低的六大原因,輕視小作文過于依賴作文模板未寫完或偏題思路窄，論證不夠充分語法錯誤和拼寫錯誤太多詞匯匱乏或者

6、堆砌大詞、生詞,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,7,雅思作文評分標準,Task Achievement/Response (TA/TR) 任務完成程度和任務反應 認真審題，不跑題、不偏題、不回答一半問題Coherence and Cohesion (CC) 連貫與銜接 合理使用連接詞，主體段每段只有一個中心句Lexical Resources (LR) 詞匯量

7、 用詞豐富、準確，多使用詞組搭配Grammatical Range and Accuracy (GRA) 語法準確性 句子結構多變，簡單句與復雜句相結合,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,8,雅思寫作四大步驟,審題列提綱寫正文檢查,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,9,劍橋雅思真題解析,Some people bel

8、ieved that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agr

9、ee or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.（Cambridge English IElTS 9－Test 2－Task2),Presentation Title runs here l 00

10、/00/00,10,1. 審題 （2分鐘）,仔細讀題，劃出關鍵字； 縮小話題范圍，明確題型。話題：教育類（做義工是否應成為高中生的必修課）題型：辯論類，同意與否型，并解釋原因 ＊題型決定寫法字數：不少于250 words（260～290words左右）,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,11,2. 列提綱 （4分鐘）－ “一邊倒”,Introduction (話題背景

11、＋自己的觀點agree)Main body (用3個分論點支持上述觀點agree） ＊增強社會責任感（enhance social responsibility) ＊提高交際能力（boost interpersonal skills) ＊提高就業(yè)適應度(improve employability)Conclusion（總結上文＋重申自己的觀點agree）,Presentation Title runs here l 00/

12、00/00,12,2. 列提綱 （4分鐘）－ “一邊倒”,Introduction (話題背景＋自己的觀點disagree)Main body (用3個分論點支持上述觀點disagree） ＊加重學生壓力 (pose too much pressure on students) ＊存在安全隱患 (have safety risks) ＊影響學習成績 (lower academic performance)Conclusion（

13、總結上文＋重申自己的觀點disagree）,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,13,2. 列提綱（4分鐘）－ “折中式”,Introduction (話題背景＋自己的觀點)Main body ＊論述自己更傾向的那一方的第1個理由 ＊論述自己更傾向的那一方的第2個理由 ＊讓步段，論述自己不太傾向的一方Conclusion（總結上文＋重申自己的觀點）,Presentatio

14、n Title runs here l 00/00/00,14,3. 寫正文,正文分5段（開頭一段，主題三段，結尾一段）每段用時5~7分鐘， 文章控制在30～32分鐘內寫完,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,15,4. 檢查 （2分鐘）,不可省略不宜做大的修改，把筆誤修正即可 ＊單詞拼寫錯誤 ＊語法結構錯誤：動詞時態(tài)、主謂一致、冠詞、介詞等,Presentation Titl

15、e runs here l 00/00/00,16,范文解析－開頭段,In some countries, it is common for seniors in high school to participate inunpaid community service. I suggest that the government should promote this asa social norm for all stude

16、nts in order to enhance social responsibility, boostinterpersonal skills, and improve employability.,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,17,范文解析－主體段1,Firstly, unpaid community service can effectively enhance stude

17、nts’ socialresponsibility. 1）Under normal circumstances, students seldom have thisopportunity since they spend most of their time in school. 2）However,community service would allow them to do good deeds and interact w

18、ithvarious underprivileged groups, including the homeless, the poor, theelderly, and those affected by tragedy. Students can offer assistance bysimply communicating with the less fortunate to drive away loneliness, or

19、simply to help with some household chores. By making unpaid communit service mandatory, students will help others in need and they will develop asense of empathy, which in turn will mold them into better citizens.,Pre

20、sentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,18,范文解析－主體段2,Secondly, unpaid community service can boost students’ interpersonalskills. 1）Indeed, students will encounter people with diverse personalitiesand they will be able t

21、o build relationships with people with differentbackgrounds. 2）The students in these programs will learn how to worktogether with their peers for the greater good.,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,19,范文解析－主體段3

22、,Finally, unpaid community service can improve students’ employability 1） because most employers find that compassion for others is admirable. 2） Experience in community service also demonstrates that a prospective emplo

23、yee can manage time efficiently, prioritize a range of duties, and deliver a clear presentation. It is this charitable work that teaches them these basic skills and gives them potential for great performance in the workp

24、lace.,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,20,結尾段,In conclusion, the experience that a student acquires from unpaid community service will benefit them greatly; they will improve their community, gain important life

25、 skills, and become better people in society. Therefore, I believe these programmes should be a compulsory part for a high school education. (304 words),Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,21,范文小結,一篇高分雅思大作文包括：鮮明的

26、文章主題（“一邊倒”或“折中式”）清晰的寫作結構（5段式）恰當的銜接詞匯閃光的語言亮點（詞匯&句型）,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,22,課后作業(yè),熟練掌握《雅思寫作紅皮書》中第11－14頁的常用的邏輯關系連接詞做到會寫、會讀、會用,Presentation Title runs here l 00/00/00,23,Presentation Title run